The children write for a total of 40 minutes. Within that timeframe they have to plan their writing (a brainstorm) write, edit and re-craft their work. They are not allowed to use dictionaries or word cards. The students completed their writing on paper but have typed it out for their blogs.
Once upon a time there was a far far away castle.There lived two children and a king they lived happy together and Amy the oldest she was a princess and she was kind and smart and her little brother was silly and playful , on the other hand there lived and evil scary nasty witch she was horrible and she made things go bad. The witch had an evil plan, so it was night and Amy and Jack ha dinner then went to bed ,but they heard whispers ,but they could not see the person who was whispering .Next morning they were very tried cause of the whispers,they went to the king but he was shocked and there was silent's,but then jack said what happened then the king said MY KING CHAIR IS GONE AND NOW WHAT AM I GOING TO SIT ON.So they looked on the cameras and saw an evil witch but then she disappeared ,so they went over to the witch and barked at the witch.The witch was very mad she was coming up with an evil plan but then the king said it YOU ARE BANNED FROM THIS LAND. So she packed her things and left.
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